My attempt at sharing my experiences...

[Curiouslengzai]

Originally Posted by EnigmaofSorrow

attempting to post from my phone...

in case anyone is wondering why there's no action yet, it's because it really took awhile before i could bring myself to do anything with my god-sis. and i don't want to spoil the flow by jumping straight in.

however, if anyone is really bored, i suppose i could slot in snippets of my other encounters while you wait for the next installment...

or should i start a new thread for each encounter?

advice and comments are welcome!

thanks!

Hello there !

Firstly let me congratulate you on great story

I have read till the end of july and have to continue another day

I seldom say this but I think it is a waste of your talent to serve in the army

A switch in career to writing is definately possible

[Curiouslengzai]

Originally Posted by EnigmaofSorrow

continued....

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Me: Well, yes and no. I don’t have a constant supply of boobs to grope…

This was purely to test her reaction…

S: That’s just too bad then…

Damn. She did not catch the hint…

And we continued chatting about other random stuff until we reached her dad’s friend’s place. I waited in the car as she went up to collect the keys.
About ten minutes later, she reappeared at the lift lobby with a guy who looked around her age. They appeared to be chatting animatedly.

Just before she reached the car she turned around to hug him, and gave him a peck on the lips. I wondered who he was…

Me (as she was getting in the car): Wow, you are barely back an hour and
you already have a boyfriend!

S: Haha. Wouldn’t you like to know…

Me: So who’s he? No introductions?

S: My my, why do I detect a hint of jealousy?

Me: Who me? You’ve got to be kidding. I look much better than him, not to
mention probably fitter…

S: Haha! That’s definitely jealousy…

Me: Right…

S: Ok, no more jokes, he’s my dad’s friend’s son. Haven’t seen him in awhile.

Me: So you kissed him? On the lips?

Ok, that definitely sounded jealous on my part.

S: What’s wrong with that?

And she leaned over and gave me a peck on the cheek.

S: See! I kissed you too!

Me: Right. That doesn’t count…

S: Well, what do you want then?

Me: Nothing, nothing… Let’s just get you home…

We drove in relative silence until we reached her place. I had not been past the area in awhile and was surprised to see that the estate had been upgraded. It was surrounded by lush greenery, multi-storey car parks with roof gardens, lift lobbies on every floor. Hell, even the bus stop where we first met was upgraded.

S: This doesn’t look like home…

Me: Yeah, the place has changed since you left.

I parked the car at the multi-storey car park and helped her with her luggage.

She appeared pensive of her surrounds, as if they were new, and not the place that she had spent 6 years of her life at.

We were silent as the lift carried us to her floor. Soon enough we reached the door of the four-room flat she used to live in.

Me: Hey, where’s the furniture?

The house was an empty space, like burglars had made off with everything in it.

S: Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you.

Me: Hmm?

S: Could you follow me to buy furniture?

Me: Well… Okay… When?

S: How about now?

Me: Anywhere you have in mind?

S: Let’s go to Ikea!

So back to the car it was to get some stuff for Shirley’s “new” house. It seemed strange at first that she would come back to Singapore without her parents to an empty house. It kept me thinking what exactly was going on. The drive to Ikea at Tampines was mostly in silence. I assumed she was thinking of what furniture she was going to buy.

How wrong I was.

Me: So where are your parents?

She did not answer but merely looked out of the window. I turned towards
her. She seemed to be in a daze.

Me: Are you alright?

S: Watch the road.

Something did not seem right. At the next traffic junction, I turned to her again. Tears were flowing down her cheeks. She was crying silently.

Me: Hey! What’s wrong?

I grabbed some tissue from the dashboard and offered it to her.

Me: Are you ok?

She still refused to say a word. I decided to drive to Ikea quickly to park the car and try to talk to her.

Me: Hey, we’re here, what’s wrong?

Again, there was no reply. Instead, she leaned over and pulled me towards her, burying her head in my left shoulder. By now, she was sobbing openly. Awkwardly, I tried to comfort her, snaking my left hand around her waist, and stroking her hair with my right.

S: My dad was promoted to Managing Director. He had an affair with his secretary. My mom found out and left the company for a rival. They are in the midst of divorce proceedings. I didn’t want to stay there anymore.

Me: Woah. That’s bad.

Wow. That was all I could say. Army must really be fucking my brains up.

S: Dad said he was sorry but didn’t want to reconcile. He said I was free to choose what I wanted to do as I’m an adult now and that he would support me financially. Mom didn’t give a damn.

I remembered that she once told me that she was closer to her dad than her mom.

Me: So you decided to come back? The flat?

S: Dad said it’s mine as long as I’m still his daughter. He wires money over monthly.

I seemed to have stumbled upon a gold mine.

Me: So what are you going to do?

S: I don’t know. Just help me settle in.

She released me from her embrace and wiped her tears. I could tell she was still struggling to pick up the pieces. As her god-brother I ought to be there for her. Seeing that I was the closest thing to ‘family’ she had now.


to be continued...

I will be in camp the whole on next week. So the next installment will probably be up next week.

Also I want to say I am very much impressed by the maturity you expreesed

How old were you when this happened You cant have been very old

The story is very detailed and sounds all mostly authentic

And I liked the part about playing hard to get as I do that as well Hehe

The bold sentence in highlight is THE SENTENCE OF THE STORY

[EnigmaofSorrow]

To bros who are wondering: Yes I'm still living with Shirley, on weekends
that is, I have to stay-in camp on weekdays...

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Anyway, I fell asleep during a GP lesson one day and was nudged awake by
Nicole.

N: Hey! The teacher is staring at you.

I groggily awoke.

Me: Huh?

N: Don't sleep.

Me: What ever.

And I placed my head on the desk again but she nudged me again.

Teacher: Enigma and Nicole, get out of my class!

I awoke.

Me: What the fuck is this? Primary school?

A collective gasp was heard around the class. Suddenly, it really felt like
Primary School.

Teacher: What did you say??!

Me: I said fuck. What's the big deal?

The whiteboard marker flew towards my direction. Somehow I caught it, and
broke it in half on purpose.

Me: What's your problem?

Teacher: Get out now. Both of you. And Enigma, go straight to the Discipline
Master.

I looked at Nicole. I could tell she was really embarrassed as her face was
reddening. She quietly packed her stuff.

Just as well, I thought. It was the last period anyway. I packed my own
things and walked out. Nicole followed behind me.

I made my way to see the Discipline Master, some short, middle-aged Chinese
guy who thought that his moustache made him look fierce, when it actually
made him look stupid.

Nicole was still behind me. I turned around. I snapped at her.

Me: Why are you following me?

She stopped.

N: Sorry.

She was shocked and a tear rolled down the corner of her eye. Suddenly I
felt bad. I reached out and tried to wipe the tear off. She moved back and
slapped my hand away.

N: Don't touch me!

Me: Sorry.

I turned around and continued on my way to the office, leaving Nicole there.


Apparently my GP tutor had SMSed the DM about me and he was waiting in his
office.

DM: So what do you have to say for yourself?

Me: Nothing? But leave Nicole out of this, she was just trying to wake me
up.

DM: I will not tolerate rudeness in this college, especially to a teacher.
Furthermore, your usage of vulgarities is unbecoming.

Me: What ever.

DM: Are you not in the least bit remorseful?

Me: Not really. Only that I caused someone else to get chased out of class
as well.

DM: Do you have anything else to say?

Me: Nope. Even if I did you probably wouldn't understand.

DM: What's that supposed to mean?

Me: Forget it. Just do what you have to do.

The DM sighed and shook his head. He took out his 'yellow slips', otherwise
known as punishment forms and proceeded to fill it up. Then he handed it to
me to fill up my details.

I expected him to pass me a pen but he did not. So I dug into my bag for
one. Dumb luck caused my pack of cigarettes to fall out and onto his table.

DM: YOU SMOKE??!

Me: Yes. So?

DM: Show me your IC.

I showed him.

DM: You are damn lucky you are legal. Otherwise I'm calling the police.

Me: Go ahead.

DM: Don't try my patience.

Me: Screw you.

The DM was extremely pissed. He grabbed the form once I was done, scribbled
something else and handed it back to me.

DM: Pass this to the general office and get out of here.

Me: Bye.

I took the piece of paper and looked at it.

Two weeks suspension. Wow.

I grabbed my cigarettes and headed next door to the general office to hand
in my form. After that, I headed towards the main gate.

As I exited the school, I saw Nicole standing there, as though she was
waiting for me.

[evantoh]

Wow. Good stuff bro.
Clean, easy to understand and neat.
Took me quite sometime to finish from pg 1-last.
Thumb upzzz!

[LaBaDingDong]

great to see updates from you bro!

[mentholfresh]

Bro TS, I haven't reach halfway of this thread, but I can say this is one of the best I seen here, the writing style, the flashbacks...

Can nominate for awards... as good as Infernal Affairs Trilogy...

Must go buy supplies for extended camping...

[EnigmaofSorrow]

Thanks bros, for the comments. Anyway to answer bro Curiouslengzai, I was 24
going on 25 when Shirley came back from Australia...

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I attempted to avoid Nicole by crossing the road and heading towards the
general direction of Jason's previous house.

He was not in school that day so I figured I could probably crash there for
awhile. I did not realise that Nicole was following me.

I retrieved my cigarettes from my bag and lit a stick, still unaware of
Nicole's presence. Then she tapped me. I jumped in shock, dropping my
cigarette in the process.

N: Hey, you are still in uniform.

I searched my brain for a retort but decided against it as I sort of made
her cry a little while ago.

Me: I don't care.

N: What happened in there?

Me: I got suspended.

N: Wow. Really?

Me: Yeah.

N: You ain't bothered?

Me: Not really.

N: I see.

Me: Look, I'm sorry about just now.

N: It's ok. I know you didn't mean it.

Me: Huh?

N: I've been meaning to ask you, is something bothering you?

Me: Huh? Me? No...

N: You've been acting differently for awhile...

Me: You noticed?

N: Erm, hello? We have been sitting next to each other since the start of
the year. No doubt you probably never said more than two words to me at
once, but I can still see things you know?

Me: Er...

N: So are you ok?

I picked up the cigarette from the ground. Only half of it was left. I
stubbed it out and took another from my pack. There were none left.

Me: Damn.

N: I have cigarettes. Let's go to the staircase or something.

Me: Wow. Didn't know you smoke...

N: It's not something I publicise.

We proceeded to the staircase and went up to the landing between the 2nd and
3rd floors.

Nicole opened her bag and took out a pack of Virginia Slims.

Me: Haha. That's a girls' cigarette.

N: That's because I'm a girl?

Me: Haha. Ok.

She offered me one and I took it. The cigarette seemed like the company was
cheating it's customers money. It was so slim that I wondered how much
tobacco was actually in it. I lit it anyway.

Me: You know what we call it right?

N: Yeah... Vagina slime.

Me: Haha! Yeah! You know who's the "we" I'm referring to right?

N: You and Jason?

Me: Ok, you really are observant...

N: Hello? He's our classmate.

Me: But I only hang around with him after school.

N: I'm not dense.

Me: I know. You're Nicole.

N: Oh my god you are lame...

At least I got her laughing.

We finished up the sticks. I decided to head to Tampines to buy protein
powder. Nicole had nothing to do and decided to follow me. On the way there,
we chatted about random things. She did not probe further into my problems.

Not yet anyway.

[Newborn]

nice sharing bro..for me newbies..can gain more info and advise from your story..

[mentholfresh]

Bro TS, this is award winning stuffs...

It's ok, write when u have the time and mood, don't rush...

And don't change, I like the way you write.

Btw, my fav is your Shirley, pen down if there's any other updates in your mind if are u comfortable to share, both narrative and actions...

[Curiouslengzai]

Originally Posted by EnigmaofSorrow

Thanks for the patience, the first installment may be a bit lengthy, so bear with me...


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My God-Sister

I got to know her while I was fresh out of Secondary School, having been assigned as an Instructor to a Uniform Group in the same cluster.










Another sign that I thought she might have been interested in me was her dressing whenever she was at home. She liked to wear over-sized T-shirts (don't they all?) and those shorts (or was it hot pants? I seriously have no idea how to describe it). The first few times, I was slightly aroused when I caught sight of her breasts and nipples (she was not wearing a bra), but I got used to it after awhile (hey, I was her 'brother', not supposed to be having incestuous thoughts, am I?).There were also a few times when she sat on the chair with her legs propped up against her, and I swear she was not wearing any underwea. I was also pretty sure that she caught me staring at her all those times, but she did not bother to change her sitting position or pull the neck of her T-Shirt up to stop me from peeking at her boobs.




post too long so continued on next post...

Now upon re reading the beginning again it seems clear that she liked you back then as a kid already

Maybe she was trying very hard to attract your attention ... but unfortunately you did not mange to get her hint ...

I also had a rather similar admirer in my schooldays ...
She was the girl who sat behind me in class

A bittersweet memory
Hmm ... maybe I should also start to write about my experience too

[sam1975]

Thanks bro,excellent story

[Curiouslengzai]

Originally Posted by EnigmaofSorrow

Me: Please. I really cannot liao.

She turned around and lay on my chest, her hand still stroking my dead member underwater.

J: Still can fuck or not?

Me: Wah lau. You suck me dry liao you say leh?

J: I think can la. Your stamina so bad ah? Go army sure die.

Me: I don’t think this is part of the army’s physical fitness test.

J: Haha, ya. If it is you sure fail.

Me: Ya la. You pro la.

J: I good right?

Me: Yes. Now please let me rest awhile.

J: In here? Shower then go to the bed la.

Me: I can’t stand la. Leg cramp.

OMG ! This is so hilarious !

I laugh so much !

[esoterics1984]

Originally Posted by Curiouslengzai

Hello there !

Firstly let me congratulate you on great story

I have read till the end of july and have to continue another day

I seldom say this but I think it is a waste of your talent to serve in the army

A switch in career to writing is definately possible

Thanks bro, but in reality, no one will hire a writer without experience, or a writing portfolio for that matter...

And I'm sure this doesn't count...

[EnigmaofSorrow]

Originally Posted by esoterics1984

Thanks bro, but in reality, no one will hire a writer without experience, or a writing portfolio for that matter...

And I'm sure this doesn't count...

Dammit my bloody cousin didnt log out from his account on my computer. Haha...

Sorry bros, having a gathering now at my place, if you see any strange updates that seem to have no link, it might be one of my cousins fooling around...

And in case anyone is wondering, no, it's not an orgy. Shirley is overseas...

[EnigmaofSorrow]

Originally Posted by mentholfresh

Bro TS, this is award winning stuffs...

It's ok, write when u have the time and mood, don't rush...

And don't change, I like the way you write.

Btw, my fav is your Shirley, pen down if there's any other updates in your mind if are u comfortable to share, both narrative and actions...

Well bro, there's really too much about Shirley to write as we have the longest history together, and even now we are living together.

I'll just share the rest first and see what else there is. Hope you understand.