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gotnotime
16-03-2013, 03:09 PM
Author's notes: First time I'm trying to write in a more local context. Please pardon me if my grasp of the dialect isn't so good.
Willie was meeting his friend at balestier shaw plaza for lunch. Being the early one, he always reached at least 15mins earlier, and james was the late one, as usual. However, james did not make it this time due to stomachache, and left him alone to explore the area by himself.
He decided to have lunch at a fast food restaurant, it was really early at 11am, and there were not many people around on a saturday at 11am, save for a few secondary school kids dropping by after CCA. Carrying his tray to a corner, he settled down and began tucking in, when he saw two hot typical ah lians walking into the restaurant. He did a quick scan from head to toe, the first ah lian probably had 32C cups, in a tube top that did not cover up too well as she kept adjusting her top, with a petite body and slim, slender legs. The other ah lian, however, had bigger 36D cups in a tank top, but she was also.. Meatier, or bah bah, as some people would say.
Apparently, the second ah lian caught him checking them out, as she went over to his table after getting her meal.
Ah lian 2: Eh, here got people sit or not?
Willie: Erm no la, you can sit if you want.
Ah lian 2: Wa lan I ask of course I wanna sit la. Ehh Ariel come here leh.
"So.. The one with the pink top is called Ariel." Thought Willie to himself.
W: Ehh how come here got so many seats you both wanna sit at my table sia? I got so handsome meh?
A: Bo la, just that we see you alone like so pitiful like that, so we accompany you la! Cannot issit? Nb dunno how to appreciate one. Ehh Cheryl, kia leh, I don't wanna sit with someone like him can.
W: Wa take it easy la ariel.. Sorry la, I got stunned la, nb you look so pretty and demure but talk like that one, cb.
A: You say what, cb?
W: Knn I say you so chio, but so vulgar, wa lan.
Ariel got stunned and blushed, smiling to herself as she opened her wrapper.
C: Wa kao you both don't talk like couple can, now I'm the one who seems lonely, cb.
W and C together: This is called chemistry, tio bo?
C: Wa knn cb, you both ah.
They soon finished their meal, chatting along the way, knowing more about each other. It turns out that all of them were from the same secondary school, but went to different schools after O levels. Willie went to poly, while Ariel and Cheryl went on to JC and ITE respectively. Willie was a year older than them, while Ariel and Cheryl just met up after their first year in school.
W: Ehh where you all live sia? I send you both home can?
C: Whoever said we were going home?
W: Simi lanjiao? Not going home then go where? Hotel ah?
A: Horny willie guessed it hor? We wanna experiment la.. But we too young to book hotel room, can help us book?
W: Nb, go hotel bo jio.
A and C: Jio you for fuck?
W: Okay lor I don't book.
A: Ehh don't like that la Willie..
And then she hugged Willie's arm, allowing him to feel her soft cups. He gave in, knowing that he'll probably be harassed non-stop..
hokkienguy
16-03-2013, 03:12 PM
big neh lian story... lai lai more more
gotnotime
16-03-2013, 03:14 PM
big neh lian story... lai lai more more
Waa so fast read liao ah lol. Ehh hokkienguy must teach more hokkien leh :p
Cannot just go up to those hokkian speaking ah lian and say "Ai sio gan mai?" Right? XD
substance
16-03-2013, 03:17 PM
Nice! Keep it cumming
hokkienguy
16-03-2013, 03:25 PM
Waa so fast read liao ah lol. Ehh hokkienguy must teach more hokkien leh :p
Cannot just go up to those hokkian speaking ah lian and say "Ai sio gan mai?" Right? XD
lol. ok.. maybe can say. wah swee. kwa liao bay jiat bay koon. (see liao cannot eat cannot sleep)
Milfey
16-03-2013, 03:35 PM
LOL camping here
gotnotime
16-03-2013, 03:41 PM
Not knowing where to go, they wandered along balestier road, until they came across hotel81.
W: That looks good, let's go for that?
A and C: Sounds good, you also sibei laojiao at this hor?
W: Simi laojiao, I only got lanjiao, dunno what's laojiao la.
Ariel choked back a laughter, as she and Cheryl waited outside while Willie went to book a room for 4 hours as agreed. In the back of his mind, he was thinking of how they should return his favour of booking the room for them...
Entering the room, all 3 of them were surprised at the standard of the room, and soon, Ariel and Cheryl stripped and went to bathe together, leaving their undies on the queen size bed, and little willie high and dry.. Willie could do nothing but check out the room, and looked at their undies in curiousity. Much to his surprise, Ariel only wore a pair of thongs! Checking out cheryl's undies, he confirmed it to be 36D cups, and her matching lace panties were moist. It felt like gel though, with a coat of slimy texture to match. He carefully put it back to where it was, and got surprised when he heard loud moans from the bathroom...
Little willie immediately stood to attention, and willie had trouble adjusting it in his jeans as it got harder and bigger. The moans got more sensual, and willie was hesitating, should he just whip out his tool and jerk off? What if both of them came out and saw him jerking?
The rational side took over and Willie decided to sit down on the chair, crossing his legs in an attempt to hide his massive throbbing erection. Ariel and cheryl soon came out, with a slight tinge of red on their faces, as they looked and smiled at each other. Walking over to Willie wrapped in their towels, cheryl went behind and ariel talked to him in front. Willie, was effectively trapped sitting down on the chair..
A: Like what you heard?
W: What... You both moaning only what.
C: (Leaning over with her boobs touching willie's shoulders) Coz we shuang ma. You leh? Shiok bo?
W: Where got shiok, hear but never see sia.
A: So naughty, I like.
Willie could never dream of what came up next.
hokkienguy
16-03-2013, 03:55 PM
knn read liao.. can think wild n lasup liao.
gotnotime
16-03-2013, 03:55 PM
Author's notes: Thanks hokkienguy for upping my points, I'm still experimenting with writing such local stories, instead of the usual neighbours, friends, sex stories etc etc. I think this story has a more local flavour to it ^^
C: Since you complain hear only hor... Boob smash!
Willie couldn't react in time as cheryl dropped her towel, using her boobs to hit willie's head. It was, surprisingly firm for its size.
W: Wtf! I know you tua neh la but don't like that leh...
C: Like what like what?
A: Pillow fight! *smashes willie's head with a pillow*
W: Okay lor! *grabs his own pillow and retaliates*
The 3 of them were smashing each other, and things got awkward when both Ariel and Cheryl's towels dropped, revealing their busty womanly curves..
Willie's eyes got wider, as Cheryl smashed a pillow on him again.
C: Le kua simi? Never see before tua neh bu ah?
W: Got, but you both...
A: We what? Horny liao right...
W: How about no?
Both of them pinned Willie onto the bed, and stripped him, allowing little willie to take a breather and stand at full attention, leaking translucent precum.
A: Hmm... How about yes?
W: K la k la you win la ariel... What you want?
Ariel and Cheryl looked at each other, and smiled.
Willie thought to himself.
"Just what have I done?!"
gotnotime
16-03-2013, 03:57 PM
knn read liao.. can think wild n lasup liao.
Haha shiok ah.. I'll finish writing this by the end of my duty in camp lol :D
hokkienguy
16-03-2013, 04:02 PM
Haha shiok ah.. I'll finish writing this by the end of my duty in camp lol :D
wah in-camp ah.. knn sianz hor but can think of many ideas when doing nothing in-camp hhaha
big_cock
16-03-2013, 04:34 PM
WoW!!!Nice & new story...support support...
ColdBlood99
16-03-2013, 06:58 PM
WoW!!!Nice & new story...support support...
sexciting hor :p
LovePotion
16-03-2013, 09:35 PM
sure got a lot of supporter like me haha
wtfman
16-03-2013, 09:39 PM
camping... support!
gotnotime
16-03-2013, 10:30 PM
Looking at both of them smile creeped him out, it felt as though he's going to get raped by these two high sex drive ah lians. Not that he'd mind any other day.
Instead, what they did next put him at a loss for words.
Ariel and cheryl started kissing each other tenderly on the lips, with their hands roaming all over from their massive chest to their lovehole, and back again. Little willie, was leaking like a tap as he stood hard at attention.
C: Aww look who's getting all aroused now huh?
A: You wanna let him join us?
C: Hmm.. Not for now I guess?
"Not for now huh.. Means later hor?" Willie thought to himself, as he continued watching this lesbian scene unfolding live before him.
Ariel and cheryl continued to carass each other, and lay on the bed, french kissing and rubbing each other. It was getting really, really unbearable for Willie, he started to wank as he watched the ladies engage in their own pleasure.
A: Uhm hmm.. Look who's getting all horny and jerky now :P
W: You both ah.. Deserve another favour from me.
A: What favour?
Willie lunged from his chair, pushing Ariel down onto the bed and leaned closely towards her.
W: What do you think, Ariel?
He kissed her, and ariel got more aggressive, grabbing his head and frenching him, while cheryl grabbed little willie from behind, running her hands up and down his entire length gently.
Slowly but sensually, willie kissed her ears, blowing hot air into them, and moved down, kissing her luscious lips before moving down to those twin C peaks of hers.
Her sensitive nipples quickly became erected to his touch, and cheryl couldn't help but moan in pleasure. Not forgetting cheryl, he ran his other hand along her body, tracing the outline of those D peaks, and twirling her nips in a circle, before moving south to finger her lovehole, which was dripping with love juice.
Moving south on ariel's side, there was a faint fragrance as he started licking her, from just above her clit, down the centre of her lips, and side to side, much like licking an ice cream cone. Ariel could only moan in ecstasy, as she turned her head from side to side, enjoying this pleasure for the first time.
Willie tried to insert his tongue into her, but ariel was too tight for that, and he did not think that she was a virgin until she told him to take it slow.
W: Aww you.. Please climb on top of me.
Willie swapped positions with ariel, with cheryl now rubbing and fingering herself, while ariel positioned herself above little willie.
W: Wait! Aren't we forgetting rubber?
A: Yolo! (You Only Live Once)
Before willie could react, she lowered herself onto little willie, grimacing as she adjusted to having something in her for the first time. That was the moment ariel had been waiting for, after cheryl told her how pleasurable it would be.
gotnotime
16-03-2013, 11:01 PM
Willie groaned as ariel lowered herself onto him, she was very warm and wet, and he felt every ridge on her walls as he stretched her lovehole for the first time. They remained in that position for a good minute before he noticed ariel started tearing.
A: Cheryl! What am I doing la.. I'm supposed to give michael my first time, but broke up with him and now I'm giving it to our school senior!
W: Hey! I ain't no replacement for your boyfriend okay?
Willie felt pissed, as he felt that he was being made use of to make michael, whoever that jerk is, jealous. He pulled ariel down, hugging her tightly as he began pumping her. Ariel couldn't stop willie as he hugged her tight, and she might as well learnt to enjoy the pleasure emnating from her very tight snatch.
W: You fucking ah lian har, think I'm your boyfriend right? Sorry but I wanna fuck you so hard!
C: Siao liao!
Cheryl got even more horny seeing Willie savaging her friend, and came a second time, as ariel closed her eyes and moaned very loudly.
Suddenly, ariel started spasing as she reached her first climax, and squirted onto little willie, with her lovejuice squirting out everytime little willie withdrew from her. It was an erotic sight to behold, and willie felt like he was reaching the point of no return as he continued pumping her hard and fast for the past 15 minutes.
W: Where you want me to cum? I'm cumming sooonnn!
A: I wanna taste you!
Willie didn't need another word as he withdrew from her, and ariel got up to suck him for the first time. He came instantly, pumping copious loads of his seeds inside her mouth, as ariel twirled her tongue and sucked every drop out of him, enjoying the taste of semen for the first time. Cheryl smiled, as she watched them both enjoy each other. It seemed to her that her job as a good friend was done, helping her get over that jerk of a michael.
A: Hmm.. It tastes sweet, next time I want can call you?
W: Wtf? But your boyfriend..
A: I broke up with that jerk, he cheated on me and even met me with that slut. If not you also won't be so lucky today hor.
W: Oh.. Ehh tell you what, why not we go meet him?
A: Mai siao la...
W: To tell him how unlucky he is to have lost you, and I had your first time.
A: Sounds good!
Soon, they washed up and left the hotel, with Willie sending cheryl home first.
Meanwhile, on his mind, he hatched another plan as he drove around..
gotnotime
16-03-2013, 11:18 PM
The last chapter will be out in the morning. :)
gotnotime
16-03-2013, 11:19 PM
Willie purposely sent cheryl back first, even though it was not on the way.
He started hatching a plan to meet michael, and ariel agreed to it, as she wanted to antagonize michael for cheating on her. However, it was to take place a month later, as willie did not want ariel to be labeled a slut for getting a replacement so soon after breakup.
In the meantime, both of them went out on several dates, as their respective schools were near each other. Not to mention, they also experimented a lot, enjoying their lustful pleasures in places like handicapped toilets, empty tutorial rooms in his poly, in his car, and the list goes on, with rubber of course.
Throughout that one month, Ariel was starting to really have feelings for Willie, as she felt that he was a gentleman, always attending to her needs. On the other hand, she was hesitant as he knows that he was being made use of to antagonise her ex.
On the other hand, Willie was also starting to fall for Ariel. Despite that vulgar and ah lian facade, beneath that lay a demure woman, who was understanding and always there for him. He too, was hesitant as he knew his role was to irritate her ex, and make him regret for cheating on her.
acidicavex
17-03-2013, 01:35 AM
Nice writing bro local favor well done!!
SpitZur
17-03-2013, 04:39 AM
Camping here to support TS
gotnotime
17-03-2013, 07:20 AM
Author's notes: Thanks everyone for the support thus far :)
As the date approached, both willie and ariel were getting uneasy.
Willie hasn't met michael before, although he was physically lean and toned, he felt uneasy meeting ariel's ex, what if michael was a gym freak and more buff than him?
On ariel's side, she was worried that willie might leave her after this is over.
Friday finally came, and willie drove his mitsubishi evolution to school for the first time, much to the surprise of his schoolmates. After all, he was a humble guy who never flaunted his wealth, and was relatively quiet in school.
Meeting ariel for lunch in his poly, he couldn't help but look at ariel clad in her jc uniform, it was a sight to behold. Little willie was getting pumped up.
A: Ehh... You okay? Keep looking at me like that I will shy one leh.
W: What shy... You were never shy lor, especially on bed right? :P
A: Naughty you! Ehh bring me to one of your school toilets, I wanna change to home clothes.
W: Hmm... Follow me.
They went to the handicapped toilet at the fourth floor, where it was vacant and nobody knew about the toilet as it was in a corner of the building. Watching Ariel do a striptease as she took off her uniform was exciting. Slowly, she walked towards him, unbuttoning her top and threw it to willie, as she grinded him like clubbing without music. Willie kept her uniform in his bag, and pulled down her skirt, running his hands around her body, feeling every inch of her fair and delicate skin, deliberately missing her spots.
A: What say... We have a quick one before meeting that asshole later?
W: Shh... Ladies should be demure, or are you in the mood for being rough again?
A: I just want you inside me.
Guiding ariel to the sink, she leaned forward and used the sink for support, while willie entered her from behind slowly. Ariel's lovehole gripped little willie with a vice grip, and ariel moaned, only to have willie cover her mouth.
W: We're in school, my dear..
Ariel nodded in agreement, as willie continued humping her in that standing doggy position, hard and fast, the way she likes it. Soon, ariel couldn't take the pounding anymore and came, squirting her translucent juices onto willie, and pushed him to sit on the toilet bowl.
A: It's about time that you sit back and relax too...
She started slowly by grinding him, leaning forward for him to grope and suck on her C cuppers. Not satisfied with that, she pushed his head up and french kissed him aggressively with a tongue fight, moaning into his mouth whenever she hit the right spot. Ariel soon changed to riding him, feeling little willie's entire length in her as she came a second time, her love juice leaking every time she impaled herself on him.
W: Where you want me to cum on?
A: inside me!
W: Siao ah!
A: I'm on the pills la, cb!
W: Knn ask you to be more demure liao right...
A: You started using hokkien first! :P
W: Lai liao lai liao! Ugh!
Willie came hard and fast, releasing a huge load into her like their first time, except that it wasn't her mouth this time. Ariel felt high as she felt the warm liquid fill her up deep inside. Thankfully, ariel always had a pad with her just in case, and she wore it to prevent cum from leaking out of her as they dressed up..
gotnotime
17-03-2013, 07:42 AM
Author's notes: This is the last chapter, as my camp duty is ending soon ^^
I'll be back with updates to 'Fucking rival' soon.
Driving his car down south to orchard area, the question suddenly popped up in his mind again. What if Ariel decided to call it quits after this has blown over?
Running his left hand along her thigh, he decided to ask in an indirect way.
W: I got something to tell you, and it's really important, dear.
A: You stroke me until like this.. Don't tell me you want another round after meeting him?
W: Wa you're the only one who can make me sound gay, but I want you not in that sexual way la..
A: Not sex then what way?
W: I don't wanna just fuck you and move through motion la. I wanna be not just a stand-in boyfriend, but to really love you and make love to you, can?
A: You say until so deep... But I've been waiting for you to say it la.
W: So.. Will you be my girlfriend?
A: Then what have you been treating me as in this one month huh?
W: Hmm... What do you think?
A: Naughty you, I soo wanna punish you later, willie. You and your little willie
W: Little willie is always ready for you!
A: Naughty you!
Soon, they reached cineleisure, and michael parked his impreza hatchback in the open carpark.
M: Seems like you got hitched with my old toy huh? What's your name man?
W: The name's Willie, and you're driving my old toy, michael.
M: Oh issit? I'd wanna race with you if you dare, coward willie.
W: First to reach NYP wins?
M: Cool with that.
Willie revved his massive tricked out twin turbo engine and sped off, with michael following close behind on the expressway. Michael caught up beside him and jeered.
W: Just a bit more power.. Gotta wait till the other turbine spools. Hey ariel, I'll turn off the air con, need the full power of my engine la.
A: Just win him can already!
Without a word, ariel helped to turn off the aircon, and there was a noticeable amount of boost kicking in, as the distance between willie and michael got further and further. By the time willie reached, he even had enough time to reverse park, and wait for michael's arrival.
W: Hmm.. I guess actions speak louder than words? That's why I gave up my old toy car. Michael, am I right?
M: You.. I'll race you another day!
With that, michael sped off to the main road. Unfortunately for him, he did not look out for traffic, as a lorry slammed right into him, crushing his car and killing him instantly.
W: Seems like there won't be another day.
Willie drove slowly to another exit after calling for the ambulance, and sent Ariel home for another round of fun.
alan0338
17-03-2013, 09:52 AM
camp here... :D
waahaa
17-03-2013, 10:19 AM
dramatic man....
Cherrygen
17-03-2013, 10:22 AM
di, welcome back "wle"! :p
hmm, the story i read recently all ended up with somebody dying :confused:
gotnotime
17-03-2013, 10:57 AM
Just wondering though, how was the story?
It's my first time writing a story with ah lians inside..
I think ah bengs and ah lians stories pretty much have a local flavour aye..
Sidra183
17-03-2013, 11:39 AM
Hey ts, nice story with a fresh change from the usual story plots. But the ending a bit abrupt. Haha. Nevertheless, good story!
BMW69
17-03-2013, 02:11 PM
LOL I found the ending hilarious xD
gotnotime
17-03-2013, 02:55 PM
LOL I found the ending hilarious xD
Glad you got the sublimal joke! ^^
On the other hand, I feel like writing another one of these "blitz" stories, where it happens fast, and ends fast lol :D
InterFace
17-03-2013, 05:07 PM
Tks for the good writeup, appreciate it
siambee
17-03-2013, 05:13 PM
knnz... got ppl die liow still can have another of fun... :D
anyway TS i still up u for most interesting parts.
gotnotime
18-03-2013, 06:59 PM
Thanks for your support :)
I'll probably update the two stories in my signature, depending on how much time I have, coz I gotnotime :D
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